That's what the things you meet in the first dungeon of Might and Magic 8 are based on iircRaelag84 wrote:In real life the Aztecs worshiped a god called Qutzicalatal(sp?) who was said to be the god of wind and knowledge. It was said that is in his true form he was a feathred serpant (something like a flying snake I suppose.)
Gorgons, Basilisks, Cockatrice.... these are all kinda similar - basically they can kill people by staring at them. It needs more variety imo. I've always liked the gnolls, lizard men and dragon fly's that Fortress had so those should be kept at least.
To be honest Raeleg your ideas remind me too much of the Dungeon faction. The Fortress has always been a collection of different beast folk rather than a unified force. It shouldn't rely on too many lizard people (it would feel too much like the lizard men are in charge of the other beast men). The humans sound too much like a cross between peasants and minotaurs (they're slaves in HoMM 5), they're just a little too simple. Why not keep the Gnolls? They could have bash and cleave, which would be pretty good for a level 1 unit. The Laima remind me of the whole elves thing that HoMM 5 has where's there's good elves and evil elves... I don't really like that kind of thing, it's kinda lame. Lizard Beast sound just like Dungeon's Mistresses, a spellcasting type of unit that's of the same race as the unit that's the backbone of the army (in this case lizard men). Again, something more original would be better. I don't nescesarily have a problem with crocodile riders... The Tezcatlipoca have a really unintelligable name and they're a bit like Assassins from - again- the Dungeon faction. Jaguar like people sound cool though, although come to think of it isn't that what Gnolls are? The Quetzalcoatl needs a shorter name imo. Sounds like a Thunderbird, although chain lightnings sounds cool (might be overpowered?).
Overall it doesn't really stand out from the other factions. I'm also wondering why you left out gnolls and dragonflies? How about adding Werewolves or cannibals/headhunters by the way?