Nice manual very graphically appeasing.
Here some "issues"
- Faction symbols made monochrome
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. (Perhaps full color looks better pg.13 for heaven)
- Really like the geographic location on Heaven. (Please include for others where applicable... Hasima come to mind.)
- As page background for faction pages add a huge watermark with each factions symbol. (Here it must be monochrome).
- I feel that creature pages should be moved to each factions section. Especially so since ability descriptions are general and with no actual
- Creature summary tables: Highlight differences from basic to upgrade versions. Also mark with a red star who is the best of the faction. (Only for speed/initiative/morale and luck).
- Creature summary tables: faction symbols are of poor quality. Table lines still visible in background on some pages (pg 81 compared to pg 82)
- Creature artworks for basic and upgraded should be separated by some space. (maybe leave the Heroes VI header also, seems to look cool enough).
- For general creature descriptions start for each faction with an entire page dedicated to generalities for the given faction. (General traits of the creatures in the given faction, general abilities like dead/undead/deamon/etc...). Also on that page a group picture with all creatures would be nice. Background watermarks with faction sign would also be nice.
- Icons for attack, defense, luck .... are poor quality
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- Crature abilities pages. Eyes jump on MIGHT / ACTIVE first instead on ability icon / name / description. Make them not so "out-standing"
numbers.
- Creature abilities pages: With the name of the creature that has an ability a tiny icon would help identify it easier.
- Creature abilities pages: Prime / Water / Fire all have icons would be nice to include them somehow.
- Nice skill wheel you have for hero classes
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. (Poor quality icons
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- For hero classes use instead of arrows use the appropriate tear icon.
- Heroes abilities: Include level requirements and might / magic restrictions
- Artifacts: what is with the double moon disks?
- Town buildings: The table at the top (pg 180 is of no help
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). Use a left to right upgrade path (from village to capitol) with arrows in-between and below, also from left to right the town rank.
- Town buildings: Before individual buildings description, an overview table which resembles the in-game building structure for each faction would help. (With click-able links
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)...Background watermarks... background watermarks...
Hope it helps...